Feedback on my work? (I need support)

VAULT1909

VAULT1909

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Basically I'm trying hard to get accepted as a graphic designer by Tox, he says that if I can get good feedback on my thumbnails and wallpapers for LC then he'll promote me, any positive feedback or constructive criticism is appreciated. Every time you give me good feedback, the further I get. Thanks :D
http://imgur.com/a/3sY8e
http://imgur.com/a/nyVnq
http://imgur.com/a/VTkVc
 
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That blue one theme on the Cobblestone map is the only one I like.

That mirage fire has a bad logo quality and blue+red what's this.. FailFish
The dust2 one is a decent one, but personally I don't like that effect.
So far I like 1 of 4 images TriHard
 
Just like santas said cobble is ok rest of them is not in "lc style" Talk with @panzer about tthat and keep going m8 dont give up
 
So you all think I should take more of a simplistic approach rather than an over the top thumbnail with effects and particles
 
VAULT1909 said:
So you think I should change the hue to red / orange then you'd like it or is it still not really that good for you
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First, please use the edit button and don't double post.
Second, nah, I don't think that style is a "LC style" like @sebus1315 said.
 
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So you all think I should take more of a simplistic approach rather than an over the top thumbnail with effects and particles
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you know the new jersey shore ? Just like girls in that show 2 much make up:D
 
You are good but i think its to much effects and i want to have the LC pics more clean. But thats My opinon only bro, So dont take it negative. So keep going man.
 
http://imgur.com/a/TNkWv
Here we go, a more clean and simplistic approach, for those who said that they were more interested in my other LC wallpaper in this style, this is more tailored to what you suggested. What do you think guys?
 
As a web and graphic designer myself, I strongly advise you to study concepts and harmony between colors. There is nothing wrong in being new and trying new things, but don't overdoit, design tend to be tricky at the beggining.

Look up for simple design concepts as color harmony and typhography, next go to developing your own logos (trust me, this helps a lot), for last I strongly suggest you to watch some web tutorials (there's tons of it).

If you want to know more about me, I can post some stuff that I work on later! :) Keep it up.
 
sebus1315 said:
@jumpShotKennedy i would love to see some of your graphics.
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Glad to do it, unfortunately every banner I'm sending are in portuguese since I work for a company here, but I ask you to take note only the design itself =D

http://www.cesuca.edu.br/file/banner-home/ba497e43de060a4e66c33c9e50f3b99a.jpg
http://www.cesuca.edu.br/file/banner-home/0cab886203ceae4420ac790540b2d7ee.png

And this is the portfolio where are all the websites we worked on: https://www.duostudio.com.br/
 

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